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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Oniki Gamashi on Thu Aug 28, 2008 3:00 am

Oniki dodged the quick slash and stopped like sensei said.then went home and rested.Ryutori dissapeared into a puff of smoke and returned to his home,waiting to be summoned again.


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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by raven on Thu Aug 28, 2008 3:02 am

"man"raven was behide oniki in 1 sec and picked him up by the neck i said "stop"

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Pluto on Thu Aug 28, 2008 7:49 pm

Pluto hurried to the training grounds after his sensei sent for him. "Just what could he want now. Yesterday wasn't so bad, maybe he's going to teach me something new". Pluto thought to himself as he looked on the distance. He saw that Raven sensei, was already waiting for him. A smile came to his face as he walked towards him.

"I heard you wanted to see me sensei. So what's up then?". Pluto asked out of curiosity. He was hoping it would be something great. At least he was expecting Raven sensei, to tell him or show him something useful. Pluto stood there as he awaited his sensei's orders.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by raven on Thu Aug 28, 2008 7:54 pm

"today i will teach u a new jutsu its a s-rank jutsu put if you use it u will probly be out of chakra"as raven stood up with a book and one hand behind my back with a smile on my face.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Oniki Gamashi on Thu Aug 28, 2008 10:38 pm

The sky was filled with clouds as Oniki headed towards the training grounds where someone said they had seen Pluto."I wonder what it says....."he thought to himself as the training area came in sight.Oniki ran forward to deliver the letter to pluto and saw him and Raven sensei standing there,preparing to train."Pluto,I have something for you.Tobimaru-sama asked me to deliver it."he said,handing the letter to his teammate.he was curious as to what it said,but knew it was none of his business.He turned to take his leave,Hoping in a way that nobody would stop him,he had something he wanted to do.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Pluto on Thu Aug 28, 2008 10:48 pm

"Hey Oniki-san" Pluto said as Oniki arrived at the training grounds. Pluto saw that he was holding a later in his hand. "Is this for me?" Pluto said as Oniki handed him the letter. "Thanks Oniki" Pluto said as he received the letter. He took a look at the letter and the expression on his face changed. His eyes seemed focused on what the letter said.

"I have no time for this, maybe later I'll go". Pluto thought to himself as he folded the letter and put it in his pocket. He seemed really busy right now and didn't think he should spare a moment.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by raven on Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:35 pm

"ok pluto you can "as raven sat back down looking at the letter as it started to rain.

" i wonder what is in there"

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Pluto on Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:44 pm

"Aye sensei" Pluto said as he prepared to take his leave. Now that he had permission to leave, he could see just what that certain someone wanted from him. The rain began to pour from the skies. "I hate the rain sometimes. This is so inconvenient tsk". Pluto then turned and headed out of the training area.

He seemed disappointed and annoyed now. He took his training very serious and interruptions were not welcomed. "This better be good. But what could they possibly want from me?". Pluto mumbled his words as he made his way. To where ever he was supposed to go to.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Pluto on Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:12 pm

"What a meeting that was. I can't believe that guy would ask me to do such a thing". Pluto said as he was on his way to the training grounds. He would meet with his sensei in order to resume their training. "What could sensei have to teach me today. I hope its something good. I have a few jutsus to work on myself". Pluto as he soon found himself entering the training area. The rain had showering down now. And the weather seemed more suitable for training.

"Raven sensei, I'm ready to continue with our training that didn't get started in the first place". Pluto said as he walked over to his sensei. Luckily he was still around. Pluto then awaited a response from his sensei. Hoping that it would be the type he would like to hear.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by raven on Tue Sep 02, 2008 4:02 am

"ok"raven stands up and puts his book down and walks out from under a tree as he lefts his hand up and sand starts to build up from under pluto and traps pluto in a dome as the dome starts to brake and makes a small while pluto is still inside.

"today i will teach you a sand jutsu sand dome because you will soon be kazakage so lets start build all your chakra and put it in to sand and then put some chakra in your hand and pick up the sand as the to parts of your chakra join up and send a sand dome at me"as raven lets pluto out of the dome and waits for pluto to trap him in a sand dome.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Pluto on Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:37 pm

Pluto watched as the sand dome suddenly formed around him. "Oh so sudden". Pluto said as it soon began to crumble. From Raven's explanation it sounds simple enough. But it always does until you attempt to do yourself. "So basically I'm using my chakra to control the sand then. It sounds simple, but it could be difficult. I will do my best to perform such a jutsu". Pluto then knelt down and placed his hands on the ground. He started channeling his chakra into the sand. Pluto attempted to move the sand, but it only raised a little off of the ground. It wasn't nearly enough to even produce a sand dome.

Pluto was however determined to learn such a jutsu. he didn't waste anytime as he soon channeled his chakra into the sand once more. He made sure to build up enough chakra into his hands. His chakra was flowing really well. But he decided to use something else to help him out. Pluto started focusing his Shoryu energy, using it as a supplement to his chakra. This should help him with his control over the sand. Pluto had his hands on the sand for a while before making another attempt.

"Sand dome jutsu". Pluto shouted as the sand rose from the ground in a swirl, but it wasn't able to form into a dome. He was just starting to get the hang of it. The sand swirl, but couldn't find a solid form. Pluto knew it would take sometime, before he could learn this jutsu. But he was ready and willing to learn.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by raven on Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:50 pm

"keep trying and you will do it and it was smart to usse your Shoryu energy to help you out you will be a great kazakage"

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Pluto on Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:18 pm

"Kazekage, I like the sound of that sensei. But what about Oniki-san? I'm sure he would want a chance at being the kazekage as well". Pluto had a smile on his face at the thought of being the Kazekage. He soon changed his focus to his training again. On his last attempt he was able to control the sand a little. But he wasn't able to form the dome. But Pluto was very determined to learn in any case. Pluto placed his hands on the ground once more and channeled his chakra into the sand. He could feel the reaction he was getting from his chakra being poured into the sand.

"Sand dome jutsu". Pluto shouted as the sand rose once more, he poured his shoryu energy into also. The sand swirled for a bit, as Pluto tried to form it into a dome. The sand dome looked like it was about to form, but it was not to be. The swirling sand soon died down. Pluto just wasn't able to form the sand dome. Not yet at least. But it didn't seem like he was going to give up yet. It was time to make another attempt at forming the sand dome. Pluto placed his hands on the ground and poured his chakra into once more. he slowly got up, he was attempting the same thing his sensei did.

"Sand dome jutsu". Pluto shouted as the sand started to form itself into a dome. "That's it keep going". Pluto said to himself as a form of encouragement. The sand kept on going, forming slowly into a dome. But before it could form, it suddenly dispersed. "I have to keep on going. I am close now". Pluto said as he stood there.

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by raven on Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:24 pm

"one more try"

(help me make new village)

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Re: raven's student training grounds

Post by Pluto on Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:10 pm

Pluto stood quiet for a while. Contemplating how he would be able to form the sand dome. It wasn't long before he started channeling his Shoryu energy into the sand. He used it as a supplement to boost his chakra. He began by channeling his chakra into the sole of his feet. He could feel his chakra react to the sand. He then focused his chakra into his hands, he would use this skill simultaneously. Pluto then closed his eyes for a moment and then opened them. "Sand dome jutsu". Pluto shouted as the sand started to form in a swirl. It was slowly forming into a dome around Pluto.

It was like he was being consumed by darkness. The dome blocked out all the sunlight as it covered him. A smirk came to Pluto's face as he the dome had finally formed around him. "I did it". Pluto said as he inspected the dome. His chakra had finally connected well enough to form the dome. He now had a defensive jutsu at his disposal. And he seemed happy to say the least.

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